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Realisation

Never did you see the world,
Through her eyes like spheres of gold,
She was to young, far too naive,
You never understood what she could see.
"It's only a crush" you'd tell yourself,
"She'll be over it soon, all will be well"
But when she smiled you felt that ache,
That throbbing pain your heart would make.
As the last rays of the summer sun,
Faded to darkness, the minutes one by one,
You lay there with her as the sun goes down,
Living a lie, dreaming, begging, you looked to the dark clouds,
Like shadows, shrouding you from the sky,
Keeping your secrets buried, away from other eyes,
And she would cry as she realised,
That only her love was strong,
Yours had died.

Not at all from personal experience haha just came to me in a few minutes so I decided to write it down :)

Hannah1996

@Hannah1996

I am very interested in the English language, literature, books, novels, poetry, plays, films, art and yoga. I like to observe masterpieces in all areas and take inspiration from such. I believe that looking deep into the literary marvels of the world can give people a greater insight into the world we live in and open up the mind to explore and understand new things.

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Comments & Feedback (6)

Glad you wrote it down, I really enjoyed reading this, awesome poemπŸ˜ŠπŸ‘

This is really fab...enjoyed it😊😊😊😊

@Stablish @misslittleDHP thank you so much guys! :D

Awe sweet, great write, little sad though πŸ’”

@naaviie aww thank you :) and haha it was kind of inspired by a really close friend to me :)

@Hannah1996 good to be inspired πŸ’š

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