I laid it bare for all to see
Just what I felt inside of me
You took no notice didn't care
There was I laid bare
Open heart overflowing
All I got was a foreboding
A feeling deep inside that love was lost you couldn't take it
This fine heart of mine was too much
I just have too much love
I laid it bare for all to see
Just what was happening to me
I couldn't take it any more you made me feel like such a bore!!!
Under your nose lay I with open heart for all to see what a fool you made of me!!!
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