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Love And Devotion Baby

Love is slowest of all motions

But the emotion is fast acting like a thermite explosion

Just as fast as a potent potion mixed from a lovers love felt devotion

Formed in the deepest caldron deeper than any ocean or frozen notion

Whats all the commotion with love and devotion

It's what makes us feel
It's what makes me feel chosen

Daniel Hing 19.02.13

HingAling24

@HingAling24

When I was dipped in the river Styx, no part of my body was missed, my thesis stressed Thetis did enlist a power unknown by man to exist........ Silly Achilles A follow for a follow ;) #projecthumanity

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Comments & Feedback (4)

Beautiful 👏👏😘

@sjw thank you 😊😘😉

@HingAling24 I commend you on using 'thermite explosion' in a poem! 😂👍

@Irrational_Kimmi haha...I've got a controversial poem in waiting! Stole it from there haha 😉😜👍

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