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You hugged me..........

The feeling of love didn't always come for free

Every time we would fight
It tore my heart to see you weak

We departed for weeks

A chance to rekindle those beliefs
Too really see
How I loved you and you loved me

See don't you see

You are the world to me
You mean so much to me
Everyday I think of you
What you
Say
Think and Do and
I just want to tell you
I love you a lot and
I hope you do too

That in truth was the tomato in my fruit salad
Those words she just couldn't learn to manage

This girl was Spanish
You could see it her eyes
Her curly hair swept as the breeze went by
The kinda girl with those sweet sculptures thighs
The kinda girl that made me weak in my sight

We spoke until the dead of night
Swapped jokes and spoke of our lives in rewind

Then it hit me
I'd been searching all my life
For someone alike
It's like you read mind

We met at isle nine
Near the herbs and the spice

"Attention all customers"

Were doing a buy one get one free on beauty at Tesco's tonight

I put down a deposit for your beauty
Then your intelligence shone through to me

Truthfully
I never knew the tales were true
Until the day I met you

How could this be
Epically I've found love in Tesco's see
A beautiful girl
Reality had met my world
Tales to be told
Brave and in lust
Raving about love
Or finding the one I could trust
Keen was my heart
Eventually I learnt
No love story ends without hurt

Daniel Hing 21.02.13

HingAling24

@HingAling24

When I was dipped in the river Styx, no part of my body was missed, my thesis stressed Thetis did enlist a power unknown by man to exist........ Silly Achilles A follow for a follow ;) #projecthumanity

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Comments & Feedback (9)

Love this and they don't always end in hurt ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜˜

Love this ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ˜˜โค

@sjw thanks babe...yeah I know it doesn't! I just haven't found the one ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ˜˜

She's out there somewhere probably thinking the same thing ๐Ÿ˜˜

@sjw darn her thinking..I'm no mind reader ๐Ÿ˜œ๐Ÿ˜˜ I think that's what makes love so impossible but at the same time so special! Hits you when you least expect it

This is more of a song than poem ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜œ๐Ÿ‘

Lol

If you want to find "the one" you have just got to look around lol

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