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Heart Of A Cinder

I'd spit into your smug expressions
But I can't behave like that
You see, I'm the princes beautiful bride
And to think you called me fat!

You called me ugly, a worthless dog
Take a look at me now and see!
Is this the face of a worthless dog
Or a girl who's finally happy?

You made my life a living hell
Forced me to cook and clean
Who'd have thought that slave of yours
Would one day be a queen?

You dressed yourself in silk and gold
Clad me in nothing but rags
When your going hungry and cold
Each day of torment drags

When they announced the prince's ball
You laughed at me when I cried
That I should like to go there too
Instead I was locked inside

I laughed with heartless gaiety
When I saw you look surprised!
I turned up in a gown of silk
And by the prince was prized

Although I should have love for you
For you my heart is ice
When I said you'd regret it one day
You should have followed my advice!

I warned you I was a fighter
I'd take the hits you gave
I stoically took all your scorn
Pretended to be brave

Deep down inside it hurt
To know how little I meant
You delighted in your spite
My strength was all but spent

Until that dark luxurious night
When I stole the princes heart
I saw you watching as we danced
Into a fresh new start

I knew someday my prince would come
But I didn't know how or when
So bow before me dear sisters
And bow and bow again!

I.Sparrow

IndiaSparrow

@IndiaSparrow

Strange swirling thoughts spin in my head and jump onto paper! 18 years young.

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@PoppyA you said you liked a fairy tale theme? So I tried another poem, but it's quite hard to do...

Good on ye cinders hehe

Well done!! I love these - recapturing the fairy tales 😄

Your fairy tale poems are brilliant!

@IndiaSparrow ; I love it - it's like what she was really thinking but obviously had to act graceful to fit her new role. Really great stuff! Sleeping beauty might be a good one to do as well - you could perhaps do a comical version about how she was actually having a kip and got disturbed. I don't know ☺ love your fairy tale poems! 💗

@Delilah @naaviie @Nom @PoppyA thanks for your awesome comments! I' know this one wasn't as good as the other one, but hey I tried :') might do another and get a theme going...

@IndiaSparrow - please keep at it!!!

Really nice write. 😊

@naaviie if that's what you guys want, then that's what your going to get ;) so watch this space! :D

@leelee101 thanks! ;)

@IndiaSparrow - yes please 😜

Sometimes we have to kiss an awful lot of frogs to get our prince...great stuff xxx

@IndiaSparrow Brilliant! 😉😊

@misslittleDHP @Fly10 thanks! And I wish we could just find out perfect frog/prince first time round. It would be a heck of a lot easier! :P

@IndiaSparrow Oh I've had some beautiful princes...it's how to stop them turning into frogs a few years down the line that I have a problem with...👱👨👦...😡👿.....🐸...😱😪💔

@misslittleDHP @IndiaSparrow Oh I've had a few beautiful Princes...it's the part where they turn into frogs a few years down the line that I have a problem with...👦👱👨...😡👿...🐸...😱😪..💔

@Fly10 haha that's class! I will admit, I have been rereading fairy tales...

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