Can anyone give me some feedback on chapter one because I've never posted a story before and not many people read my writing, so I need some opinions. Thanks :)
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Girl writing endless supernatural love stories in Guernsey. I like to write the darker stuff, but I do a lot of quotes too. MASSIVE Muse fan :)
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