(Probably)

Irrational_Kimmi • 665 followers

Outrage
At your
Unthinking
Knee-jerk
Reaction
And your
Not so quiet
Revolution,
An unceremonious
Break up,
Bounced back
To a plethora
Of apologies and
A speed-of-light
Make up.
I forgive you,
I'll forget,
Move ahead
Like you didn't
Take a chunk
Out of me
With your
Over-thinking,
Like you didn't
Make me totally
Desolate
For two days.
You're hard work,
A cypher,
I spend many hours
Unravelling,
Just to realise
We got
Wires crossed
Somewhere down
The 6000 mile line
And we will
(Probably)
Be just fine.

#communication-breakdown #emotional-conflict #general #long-distance-relationship

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sarahgamal

Dec 28, 2012 at 10:19 AM

Sending you hugs❤❤💪💪💪💪

Irrational_Kimmi

Dec 28, 2012 at 10:23 AM

@sarahgamal thanks hun. I'm still a little upset with him!

sarahgamal

Dec 28, 2012 at 10:28 AM

@Irrational_Kimmi I know ❤ sorry couldn't offer much support have been sick since Christmas but here for you ❤😘

tannar

Dec 28, 2012 at 11:33 AM

Hey how's you ,, why do u call urself Irrational_Kimmi ?

sjw

Dec 28, 2012 at 11:40 AM

You'll be fine hun sending you hugs 💝💋

leelee101

Dec 28, 2012 at 11:48 AM

💪💪💪💪💪❤❤❤👍😘

Irrational_Kimmi

Dec 28, 2012 at 12:51 PM

@tannar hi! Well, my name is Kim but my family/friends call me 'Kimmi' and I have a tendency to be a little irrational sometimes!

Irrational_Kimmi

Dec 28, 2012 at 12:51 PM

@sarahgamal @sjw @leelee101 😘 thanksgiving lovelies!

jhall

Dec 28, 2012 at 1:07 PM

I love the form of this poem. It will have great impact if read to an audience.

tannar

Dec 28, 2012 at 1:09 PM

Lol I haven't noticed ,, bless ya arnt we all ,,

Irrational_Kimmi

Dec 28, 2012 at 1:13 PM

@jhall thank you! That's what I was going for with this structure 😊

redfae

Dec 28, 2012 at 4:04 PM

Hope u and ur man r ok. Must be hard to be so far apart x hug x

naaviie

Dec 28, 2012 at 10:24 PM

Oh what happened!? You will be ok though, bumpy road still travels 😜

Irrational_Kimmi

Dec 28, 2012 at 10:26 PM

@naaviie well we broke up on Xmas day...then got back together two days later. Distance is hard, wires get crossed, you know? But I think we'll be ok!

naaviie

Dec 28, 2012 at 10:30 PM

Ouch! That must've been rough for you both, so glad you're all ok now ☺ plain talking always helps 😜💚

Irrational_Kimmi

Dec 28, 2012 at 10:37 PM

@naaviie yeah it sucked pretty effing bad but it's over and we're ok. Four more months and he's back. It'll be easier when we actually get to see each other.