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Letter To You

It would be five in the morning,
And I would be still awake,
So I'd pick up a pencil and page.
And I start thinking and writing,
Of just what I'd say,
If we were face to face.

I'd tell you just what,
You are to me.
I'd tell you that you are loved.
I'd tell you all,
These simple truths,
'That you are a gift from above.

You're lovely like a flower,
Your eyes sparkle,
Like the sunshine.
So I'd write that I would,
Love for you,
To...be...mine...

I'd say that you're special,
There's no doubt it,
You pretty and kind,
And there's no other,
Like you,
That I can find.

That the flowers will,
Bloom for you,
Every glorious day.
And the birds will stop,
Singing their song,
To hear what you say.

And the angels,
Watch over you,
Guarding you from above.
All in all, that poem would say,
Is that with you...
I'm in love.'

Klaire

@Klaire

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I am really enjoying your pens:) Great write. You are one of my favourites here.

@Pupa Awwww, thanks 😉😘 Glad you like my poems

@Pupa yeah sidewalk prophets have a certain quality about them..

Isn't this a song?

@Burrfoot What is sidewalk prophets?

@Klaire it's the band that wrote the song 'the words I would say' where the first half of this poem is taken from .. Ironically a Christian band 🙏

@Klaire yes klaire it is we all use google

@Burrfoot I never took it from anywhere!

@sarahgamal I know that... Are you guys targeting me because I oppose your views on religion?

@sarahgamal 😂 it's now been edited, changing 'three' to 'five' and adding a few other words

@Klaire it's a simple observation Klaire ...

@Burrfoot I've also never heard of that band before.

@sarahgamal @Burrfoot I HAVEN'T EVEN HEARD OF THE BAND! Sorry to use capital, but you're not believing me. I changed it so you would stop bothering me on it, so if it would make you go away. I've again had a bad day. Please stop targeting me. This is not copied!

@Klaire klaire in a previous post u specifically mentioned in comments that u listen to this genre of music and it's ur favorite so it is only normal to be inspired by their words. Denying it and editing this one as well won't make it better hun... And are you gonna edit more than 100 posts?

@Klaire I'm highlighting that you have plagiarised this and no doubt many other pieces.. These ones were simply found on google, if you want I could check your other ones on a plagiarism checker? Its nothing to do with religion, many have done it before you and they all eventually get caught. It's not so much that you stole these words, but the extent that you accept praise and never give credit until someone recognises the work.. The first half was exactly the same, word for word as the sidewalk prophets song and you have said you only listen to Christian bands.. Funny though, the only way you changed it was to omit the bit about your lord?! Even with the edit you have done in the last ten minutes it's almost exactly the same

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