The sun goes to sleep,
Orange ripples,
Over the sea,
My love for you triples.
Colours dye the skies,
Our hands are intwined.
I look into your eyes,
Seeing what I can find.
Love, passion.
Happiness, dreams.
My heart is crashing,
In orange your face gleams.
The sunset has ended,
The stars shining bright.
Our evening was splendid,
As moon glows in the night.
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#colour. I sit along the wooden dock. Entwined around your waist. We see the sunset reach a peak. It lights up your whole face. SUNSET ORANGE, mixed with. Cherry-blossom pink,.
You are my shining star. No matter how near or far. Your brilliance shines through. Twinkling away a light so true. With your shining light in my life. I am completed, no more trouble or strife.
All the long time I lived,. I found you waiting for me,. Seated daintily as a bloomed rose,. Once we pried love to see,. All what love heart shows,. You overwhelmed my entity,.
Tender breaths taken, breathing softly. Gentle heartbeats, pacing slowly. Sweet nothings, whispered longingly. Hands held, they fit eachother perfectly. Eyes meet, a stare met lovingly.
I love the way you smile. As you pull back your hair. I love the way you bite your lip. As you try to hide your stare. I love the way you grin so widely. Just after we do kiss.
Love is patient, love is kind, And what our loves express is true. No amount of tragedy can tear Or break the love I have for you. Time has healed our many wounds, But has not erased the memory.
My brightest day. My darkest night. My love for you. Shines so bright. I can not tell. These thoughts i feel. It's almost like. They are unreal. But as i go on. Day by day. Not a single thing.
Oh how I love you my Purple Rose. I hope that my love for you is evidently shown. I may come off a little shy but don't get me wrong. There's nowhere I rather be than with you all night long.
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