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Great Story Sender

Great explorer,
Great inventor,
Tell us your truth
Oh great story sender,

Truth doesn't fit
With this twisted notion,
Well that's okay it will
with this strange devotion,

Well if it still doesn't fit
I'll force on the truthful piece,
And the words you will believe
The truth is just on lease,

Great explorer,
Great pretender,
Tell us your lies
Oh great story sender,

Your power and place,
Makes us all believe,
Me on the other hand
See how it deceives,

Stories are like lies,
Just written with ink,
Or maybe like truths
Twisted I think,

Great explorer,
Great inventor,
Tell us your stories
Oh great story sender.

LivingDeadGirl

@LivingDeadGirl

22 year old love to read write and sing. Here to explore and share the words.

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Comments & Feedback (18)

Wonderfully written yet again...I love the depth to your poems...stunning💜💜💜💜💜

@misslittleDHP Thank you, it's wonderful to feel such appreciation.

@Nom @misslittleDHP thank you both for the reposts.

@LivingDeadGirl I always repost if I feel something needs to be seen/heard.

Really good 😃

@Nom Well I'm flattered you feel that this piece is something that should be seen/heard, so thank you all the same.

@glen Thank you and thank you for the repost.

Loving it! The truth is what we decide individually. I respect other peoples viewpoints if they don't harm me😄

@Stablish thanks for the repost.

@LivingDeadGirl no worries 😜☀

Not sure how many times I can say it, but I will once more. Your poems have been so constantly well written, it looks like you will get top post today, you deserve it without a doubt. Keep doing what your doing✨🌟👌

@LivingDeadGirl you should be flattered, it was beautiful

@Stablish wow thanks I guess I'm really not looking for that though, I just want to express myself in a place with ought judgement. It's strange most think I'm deluded and weird but here I feel vaguely accepted. Thank you for your kind comments.

@Nom Thank you. I'm glad you think so.

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@DuRoLuRo exactly I'm glad you agree, I think that it's not just about what we say but also what we believe. Thank you for your comment.

That how I felt before I joined, then I just started writing how I felt down and realised that perhaps I wasn't so alone. You may not be looking for it but you are heading for it. It's a nice pat on the back though I think, makes you feel worth something. Well it did for me the first time I got it. When I first wrote on here I never expected the support and praise I got, I have just been writing my life out in poetry and I don't regret a minute of it. I don't even like to think about how unconfident I was before I came on opuss, I had no self belief at all, but thanks to this great community I now have. Sorry for getting carried away in the comments, I ether say a little or a lot lol, take care😃

@Stablish I agree I never expected this at all, and I really don't mind it's lovely to be around people who think so highly of my posts without judging me. Thank you for your kind comments and you take care too.

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