Did you know that the UK has over a million children in school with a lifelong illness. After working with children with serious heart conditions for over three years, I decided to write a story, making a teenager with a disability the hero. I've posted the first chapter as an Opuss. I'd love to hear your feedback.
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Philosophy undergrad in London, writing to provoke debate and make you uncomfortable. Comment is encouraged, especially when I'm wrong.
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