Love Story (Fangs So Deep For You)

MrsS • 265 followers

I am pale, paler than you thought I would be...

I am young, youth eternal flows within me.

I lunge! You jerk away, eyes wide with panic.

I strike!! Your body a machine and I, The Mechanic.

The Pain. The pain it sears through flesh and sinew.

My gain. I feast diligently, my eyes upon you.

Your lifeblood, it courses through my every morsel.

My victim, you are among the many, around the carousel.

My choice. I pick the freshest looking bite...

Did I choose to be a vampire? No time to care, but it's you I chose tonight.

#dark-poetry #general #gothic #predator-prey #psychological-horror #vampire

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Comments & Feedback (11)

Sep 29, 2012 at 10:32 PM

❤❤❤👍😘

Sep 29, 2012 at 10:38 PM

@minxyMolly Thanks for the RP 😘

Sep 29, 2012 at 11:01 PM

#nightdwellers @RichWithey @naaviie 😚😚

Sep 29, 2012 at 11:45 PM

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Sep 29, 2012 at 11:54 PM

@RichWithey Now there's a film I haven't seen in a long time!! 😉👍 I was a goth / rocker / 'biker' (leather trousers, but sadly no bike!😂😂), and many more - a kaleidoscope of me!!! But don't often get to delve into who I am these days, too busy loving my boys 💜💜 Perhaps there was a nod to Lost Boys from my subconscious?! In any case, I shall watch it again sometime soon - thanks for the reminder! 😉 And for the RP 😚😚🍻

Sep 30, 2012 at 12:00 AM

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Sep 30, 2012 at 12:03 AM

@RichWithey Metallica...? Pantera...? Alice In Chains...??

Sep 30, 2012 at 12:10 AM

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Sep 30, 2012 at 12:14 AM

@RichWithey Pearl Jam, def!!! Sexy voice! Loved all their stuff, but not really au fait with any new stuff much... AIC too though - another very sexy voice!! Such amazing lyrics from these people... {sigh}

Sep 30, 2012 at 12:22 AM

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Sep 30, 2012 at 12:29 AM

@RichWithey 😉😄😄 I'm into many diff types of music, bit of a butterfly me! But I do miss it all... The words to songs such as 'Jeremy' are just so disarming... Still swims around in my head from time to time. We've got a club here called The 2 Pigs and they play all that great old stuff (as well as some new crap stuff!!) Love love love going there when I get the chance (which sadly isn't very often!!)

Sep 30, 2012 at 12:32 AM

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Sep 30, 2012 at 12:37 AM

@RichWithey Sunny Cheltenham!! It's not a great club by all intents and purposes, but it's the only one that isn't all '15-going-on-21, Fake Boobs, Perfick Nails...' and all that!!! 😂😂

Sep 30, 2012 at 12:42 AM

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Sep 30, 2012 at 12:44 AM

@RichWithey Chelters is alright.... Bit cliquey! But I've met a few 'out-of-towners' like myself in recent years... (they're much nicer than the 'indigenous folk!'!!😂) been here 11 years in March 😲😱

Sep 30, 2012 at 6:13 PM

@naaviie Thanks for that RP chicka 😘😘

Sep 30, 2012 at 6:14 PM

And you @sjw 😘😘

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