Ok guys so this round's over and all your entries have been incredible! But I'm gonna go straight into the rankings.
3rd @SJW this was a brilliant piece and I felt that although a bit short really captured the emotion and the feeling of pain with few words.
Next up which I'm not too sure if I'm allowed to do is award joint 2nd.
2nd @ wolfie superbly styled and versed the poem played heavily on the past and reminiscent nostalgic feel to the piece was brilliant.
2nd @naaviie this was again another well written piece and the layout was fantastic!
Finally we're at 1st place. This was tricky and very fortunate as the award goes to a last minute entry from @Burrfoot with "Heartache" this was just an amazing poem and I loved it. Its really hard to describe so all I can say is read it!
Well done to everyone who entered it was great to read all of your work. Looking forward to the next contest :)
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@NickyX thanks :-) well done all! Loved reading every single piece. Need a new box of Kleenex tho now :-)
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