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Chewing Gum

Cellophane squeaks as I
Unravel the seal
Edge my nail under flap
For a 'chew after meal'.

14 chewy soldiers
Stand straight in two rows
Minty aromas
Start to reach my nose.

Which soldier is going
To be first to die?
Pick third left, bottom row
And lift him up high.

Peel back the paper
Stripping him bare
Pocket his uniform
As he quivers in prayer.

Into my mouth
With a chomp and a chaw
What a sad end for
A veteran of war.

Nom

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Life's a mystery.

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V.cleverπŸ˜‰

@Fly10 thank you! I literally just wrote it as I got out a piece of chewing gum!

@Nom Spontaneity often produces the little gems!

Talent oozing here!!πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰

@Nom it reminds me of something I used to do with M&M's , I'm certainly going to enjoy the next pack of chewing gum I have now :)

@michga wow! That's high praise. Thank you so much :) and thanks for reposting :)

@Weirdwolf I need you to write a poem about what you did with M&M's! Thanks :)

@Fly10 that's very true :)

@Nom I have a similar freaky ritual process with Jelly Babies :)

@renagade146 Not so freaky! It seems we're all at it. :)

@Nom very true!

Hahahaha! This made me giggle...

@naaviie glad to help...

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