Jenny's Window

@zoodark this was my attempt at a poem in 'your style'. So far my poetry has been very introspective so I thought I'd try something new!

Wonderful picture of an escape from everyday dreariness. I like 😉

I like it 👍😜

@Fly10 thanks, inspired by a lady on the train today, got me thinking...thx for the compliment!

@glensaggs thx :)

Nice 😊

@Delilah thx!

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Nice internal rhymes - careful not to confuse lack of lined end rhymes with absence of structure. That being said, I think you pull it off admirably! J x

@Zoodark thanks! Yes, I found it hard to set a rhythm when I'm not rhyming!

@Nom try tapping your foot when writing - remember your stressed and unstressed syllables :O)

Like the title by the way! J x

@Zoodark thank you! Your criticism is much appreciated!