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Opuss Battle Royale Monty 3

"Holy shi......" My mouth fills with water. I choke. Swimming against the flow. Struggle to get air. @Seamonster is too strong. I go with the tide. Washing away. I see a ghost along side me. Teasing me. I recognise her, it's Heather. How did she die? It's too late to think on that. I see the cliff coming up ahead. "Shit shit shit." I scrabble at the rock. Fingers clawing for perchase. Then the water washes me over the edge. I feel myself falling. It's a wonderful sensation. As the end draws near my life flashes before my eyes. At first its ok. Then it taunts me, all the wrongs I've committed. I see Arty. I see monsters fall before my blade. Then humans, I turned on my own race. I'm horrified at what I've become. The last memory it leaves me with is my first kiss, it's Arty. My heart brakes. The image is imprinted on my eyelids. I wish that I had made that kiss last. I smile sadly. A tear slides down my cheek. I hit the floor. My body shatters. The smile remains.

OdinsFist

@OdinsFist

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Good stuff! Love your character!

😭sadness fills me as he dies

@OdinsFist so sad :-(

@OdinsFist brilliant ending though

@OdinsFist and why didn't you alert me?! That you had done it

Because incase you hadn't caught on I'm still quite pissed with you

@OdinsFist Hmmm... Monty dies? Very interesting. Looking forward to seeing your Myth Hunter series now. This maniac was good once. Sad now.

@OdinsFist well you know what I'm really pissed with myself because I was a complete and outer idiot and i didn't think and was stupid. I really regret it and want, no, NEED my old friend back. (@OdinsFist )

@OdinsFist I've released Hellbound 3. You might want to read it.

Will do

@OdinsFist please just read it.

@OdinsFist there's always prequels, alternate timelines, all manner of ways back 😜 trying to find one for mine lol.. Great ending

Look @OdinsFist I'm not gunna give up on you. I never have and never will give up on any friend if mine.

Love it, I've got an ending in mind for mine now I think, nicely written😊👍

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