You leave me breathless,
Head spinning,
Still grinning.
You leave me dizzy,
Twirling round,
Upside down.
You leave me feeling crazy,
Wanting more,
Never a bore.
Adrenalin still rushing,
A bright coloured poster,
Roller-coaster.
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