A heart full of sorrow,
A bird void of song,
When you left, you broke my heart,
Now it's all gone wrong.
A light that has gone out,
A house that's fallen down,
I know that I've lost you.
You didn't fool around.
A ship that is sinking,
A word that has been said.
When you left me,
You left me for dead.
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Lines ever more unclear, Not sure I'm even here...
How can I sleep when the reason to wake is gone Why would I pray when the reason to hope is gone When could I forget when the reason to remember is gone.
Would we have imagined that it would end like this. Lay down beside me. It is our last kiss. Please just let it be.
Right from the start. I believed in your heart. We were hardly apart. It seems time won't tell. If a rebellious swell. Brings dreaded farewell. All is lost, I am sure. Cannot be like before.
Tears down my cheeks, Running hot and cold, I knew you'd never last, Everyone gets old. It's still a nice illusion, To have you always there, No matter what I do or did, You would never care.
I force a smile onto my broken face,. Those memories I try so hard to forget,. Everyone sees a shimmering smile,. But inside a lasting feeling of regret,. At all the things I didn't say,.
Wake me, only as you drift into the cavities. And leave nothing behind to remind me. That we were never really that involved. The pictures bear no resemblance at all.
As I drown in fathoms of pain. I know you won't come back again. And as I'm sinking, ever falling. It is your love that I am mourning. @Platypus. I try to stand against the tide.
The glimt in your eyes is nowhere to be found, As I notice my own eyes flicker to the ground. To say the least it is hard to see, How you'r now nothing of what you used to be.
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