As I drown in fathoms of pain
I know you won't come back again
And as I'm sinking, ever falling
It is your love that I am mourning
@Platypus
I try to stand against the tide
Waves of tears that I have cried
I see all hope start to capsize
Through stinging water coloured eyes
@leelee101
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How can I sleep when the reason to wake is gone Why would I pray when the reason to hope is gone When could I forget when the reason to remember is gone.
Would we have imagined that it would end like this. Lay down beside me. It is our last kiss. Please just let it be.
A heart full of sorrow, A bird void of song, When you left, you broke my heart, Now it's all gone wrong. A light that has gone out, A house that's fallen down, I know that I've lost you.
Right from the start. I believed in your heart. We were hardly apart. It seems time won't tell. If a rebellious swell. Brings dreaded farewell. All is lost, I am sure. Cannot be like before.
Tears down my cheeks, Running hot and cold, I knew you'd never last, Everyone gets old. It's still a nice illusion, To have you always there, No matter what I do or did, You would never care.
I force a smile onto my broken face,. Those memories I try so hard to forget,. Everyone sees a shimmering smile,. But inside a lasting feeling of regret,. At all the things I didn't say,.
Wake me, only as you drift into the cavities. And leave nothing behind to remind me. That we were never really that involved. The pictures bear no resemblance at all.
The glimt in your eyes is nowhere to be found, As I notice my own eyes flicker to the ground. To say the least it is hard to see, How you'r now nothing of what you used to be.
@yikici Looks like it could be a constant thing maybe, after one comes to an end, another starts ? It's up to you though @yikici really, it's a good idea so I don't see why not, you might have to change the #FridayFun tag though lol. Just goes to show how well it's taken off I suppose☺
@Stablish lol, we discussed that yesterday with Lee and agreed we didn't want to ruin it's fun by doing too much of it... Maybe a rethink is needed... What does everybody think? I'm happy to keep it to the Friday; but if there's a demand we could try for a week and see how it fairs...? @leelee101 @sjw @Platypus @RichWithey
@yikici I'm easy either way, it would be nice as something to look forward to on a Friday though. Whatever you want to do with it really 👍👍
@yikici @Stablish @sjw I've done this for Abby because she missed it and took time out to ask for it, that's all. I agree, we should keep it for Fridays and yes it would be good to keep the tags random. She just wanted to be involved, and you know me, I'll try to oblige when I can. Keep the Friday Fun as its own entity, this can be as a standalone piece. 👍👍❤
@yikici @Stablish I agree it should stay a Friday thing, I just didn't realise that so wrote a follow on to yesterday's one, and @leelee101 explained it to me, and since I'm leaving tomorrow, and won't be back for a few weeks, Lee kindly said he would start another one today.
@BVHarding now that's a really nice thing to say, thank you, I appreciate that. 👍👍 And thanks for reposting too. 🍻🍻
Righty-o, as per the rules then Lee you should tag somebody to continue -not tag all 3 of us 😉 @Platypus
@Platypus @leelee101 @sjw @ckahn @Stablish I actually thought the tags would last more than the hour it did yesterday Iike span I've a couple of days atleast lol so it would overspill to another day; I underestimated you fab Opussians 😘💐✨
@Platypus - hey, sorry I've totally missed everything that's going on. Barely a minute to think let alone write. Have great fun with this guys 💚🌹✨
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