A crimson field,
Full of blood,
Men dying,
A ruby flood.
A crimson sky,
Reflecting on,
All that bloodshed,
Under midday sun.
A crimson flower,
Reminding us,
Of heroes that died,
In all this fuss.
A crimson field,
Full of blood,
Men dying,
A ruby flood.
A crimson sky,
Reflecting on,
All that bloodshed,
Under midday sun.
A crimson flower,
Reminding us,
Of heroes that died,
In all this fuss.
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Lines ever more unclear, Not sure I'm even here...
#myfavouriterepost. Father may I. Please I beg. Stay one more hour. From my bed. It's getting late. I know it's true. And soon I'll sleep. The whole way through. But for now my father. May I please.
#myfavouriterepost Remember everything you did right. All the beautiful things, that make you happy to have the gift of sight.
Always expected to do something more. To do something better for. Everyone but me. But I know that one boy that can see. Not the perfectionist but the rebel inside. The fighter the one to win.
I cause everything I made you this way You blame yourself But it's mine to blame. You say it's your fault But it's mine to blame That's just like saying The sun, is gray.
A tree to me. Is a tall standing favor. I have yet to know. What that means exactly. A tree. Green leaves. That savor the sun. Strong roots. That go deep underground. Thick branches.
Please, I need inspiration. I have writers block!!.
You try to be perfect, But when you're perfect Your fake When you're yourself I love you..
He opens the door, they stumble, fumble for words, shy glances at the floor, excited , confused exchanges, awkward moments, close then not close, should we, did I , should I , smiles in gaps,...
@BVHarding I don't really think its one of my best but it's one of my strong favourites.
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