Your words are lies,
Your talk just isn't true,
All those empty threats,
You wouldn't dare do.
Your speech is shallow,
No meaning, no depth,
As for your promises,
They're never kept.
I know you're not real,
I know you're not true,
But in the end,
The biggest lie is YOU!
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Lines ever more unclear, Not sure I'm even here...
Staring back at me. Eyes a bone-chilling blue. No emotion in them. Not a light lit within you. The cold hard you. Yet to realize the truth. My soul knows. Its the sleuth. Sputing lies at the world.
#youngwritersemotion Forgiveness is hard, For the things you've done, For the things you've said, And what you've become.
Disappointed, my child I am disappointed Your efforts were strong But not enough I will not trust you again I am disappointed You were so promising So welcoming But it wasn't enough I will no longer...
#youngwritershousehold No oxygen, No air, How am I meant to breathe. Nothing here, Nor there, I'll just sit and seethe. You took away, My breath, And with it my life.
Lips sealed, Ink written riddles, Art of yours, tongue to wield. Reckless & messy, playing emotions like a fiddle. Looking right in my eyes, Out comes all of your lies.
@sjw #emotioncontest Hot rage, Burns through, Turn the page, Must get you. Not calming down, I am mad, So you must frown. I will make you sad.
The truth is all I need to set me free. But the truth is one thing you won't give to me. We parted so sudden without warning or reason. You gave me fake sentiments. which I'll never believe in.
My inner chantress summons me to my knees Whispering taunts are carried on the breeze My perception of what once was tis now gone Carried away by torrid tempers so strong Unforgiven and relentless is...
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