No oxygen,
No air,
How am I meant to breathe?
Nothing here,
Nor there,
I'll just sit and seethe.
You took away,
My breath,
And with it my life.
I feel I'm facing,
Death,
He's wielding his black scythe.
I just want to,
Run,
To get away from here.
Being with you is,
No fun,
I wish you'd just disappear.
Maybe I will,
Live,
To tell another tale.
Or perhaps I'll,
Go with,
Someone who doesn't make me wail.
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Lines ever more unclear, Not sure I'm even here...
Into muddy waters My vision now blurred I am speaking But I don't think you heard I am exhausted Too weak to now fight The words won't come As my throat constricts tight Is this it.
How many times do I have to say sorry until you realize I meant it. How many times do I have to shed tears for you to realize I'm broken as you are.
I'm tired and emotional, But I can't tell you why.. I can't bare what you'll say to me, I can not watch you cry..... But I can't do this anymore, I cant look in your eye..
Slightly transfixed by your smile, Your not quite the norm tho are you. Still, I'll gaze on for a little while, Maybe I'll see your point of view.
So many feelings. My heads hit the ceiling. I don't know how to say. But I feel I'm being made to pay. You said you wanted me. All I wanted was for you to see. The messed up shell. The months of hell.
I won't let you see them. They aren't yours to treasure. Watching me cry, Gives you some sort of pleasure. My tears are a sign, Of frustration and pain. Once you had seen them, You want them again.
I feel alone, Though you are right beside me. You make me feel strange, odd and unwanted. I hope it's all inside my head and that you love me really, For I love you, even though you may not love me.
Your words are lies, Your talk just isn't true, All those empty threats, You wouldn't dare do. Your speech is shallow, No meaning, no depth, As for your promises, They're never kept.
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