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misslittleDHP
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Into muddy waters
My vision now blurred
I am speaking
But I don't think you heard

I am exhausted
Too weak to now fight
The words won't come
As my throat constricts tight

Is this it?
The beginning of the end
I now can't call you
An enemy or a friend

Confusion holds me
Tightly in his grip
Into a dark place
My consciousness does slip

You haunt me
Oppress all that I am
Of what I do
You've never been a fan

Your inner turmoil
Spills over to me
Your insecurity
Makes you too blind to see

The hurt you cause
Pains me to the bone
Being with someone
Yet I've never felt so alone

Trust has vanished
From every corner of your mind
You say horrible things
Hidden in a tone so kind

If you push me
I'm likely to bolt
You'll ask yourself why?
Was it all my fault?

If I'm unhappy
I will definitely run
How did this happen
What have we both become?

I'm incomplete
I don't know how to make me whole
My happiness
You foolishly stole

©Kim Brown 26th February 2013

#emotional-poetry #general #inner-conflict #relationship-struggle
misslittleDHP

@misslittleDHP

Writing has been my friend since a teenager...I laugh, cry, think, pretend, smile as I do it. I feel that I communicate better through my writing as in person I can appear a tad scatty.

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Comments & Feedback (18)

sarahgamal
sarahgamal
Feb 26, 2013 at 10:38 AM

👏👏👏 more than a excellent piece lovely Kim 👏👏😘

chy
chy
Feb 26, 2013 at 10:41 AM

Beautifully written, hope its not true.. If it is then sending huge hugs 💗

misslittleDHP
misslittleDHP
Feb 26, 2013 at 10:55 AM

@sarahgamal @chy thanking you both muchly...hugs gratefully received ...and big hugs back for the RP's 💪💪💪💪❤😘

sjw
sjw
Feb 26, 2013 at 11:32 AM

It's lovely to see your posts again hope this is fictional...and when are we getting more 27 voices! 😘😘

misslittleDHP
misslittleDHP
Feb 26, 2013 at 11:34 AM

@sjw awww thanks Hun ...I was only thinking about getting off my arse to write another 27 Voices...it's in hand Hun ...big mwah for the RP and hope all is well your end gorgeous 😘😘😘

leelee101
leelee101
Feb 26, 2013 at 12:22 PM

😘😘😘👏👏👏

CookieCandyCream
CookieCandyCream
Feb 26, 2013 at 4:24 PM

Very nice hope this isn't true😳😳😳

CookieCandyCream
CookieCandyCream
Feb 26, 2013 at 5:52 PM

Lovely piece of poetry😇😇👸👸

misslittleDHP
misslittleDHP
Feb 26, 2013 at 6:21 PM

@CookieCandyCream thanking you Hun 😄😄😄

misslittleDHP
misslittleDHP
Feb 26, 2013 at 6:21 PM

@josiester...thank you for the lovely RP Hun 🌹👠👠

eddie12309
eddie12309
Feb 26, 2013 at 9:04 PM

Hope your ok. Not seen you around much. 💚

misslittleDHP
misslittleDHP
Feb 27, 2013 at 10:45 AM

@eddie12309 getting there my sweet...super busy...how are you?...big huggies for the RP 💪💪💪🌹💗

eddie12309
eddie12309
Feb 27, 2013 at 6:50 PM

@misslittleDHP yes all good, just so busy. I'm afraid Opuss is the ball that I drop. How's the cards going?

misslittleDHP
misslittleDHP
Feb 27, 2013 at 7:10 PM

@eddie12309 I too have had to drop some balls..eg Opuss and Cards are on the back burner as I'm concentrating on my book, nearing completion now but it's going to be a 2 part book so will start writing the next one after all the while getting my manuscript ready for agents...phew!...sooo pleased you're ok Hun ❤❤❤

eddie12309
eddie12309
Feb 27, 2013 at 7:13 PM

@misslittleDHP that's wonderful news!

merlin1038
merlin1038
Mar 9, 2013 at 1:46 PM

Powerful write, struck a chord with me thankyou😘

redfae
redfae
Mar 12, 2013 at 9:29 AM

A really good write :) x

minxyMolly
minxyMolly
Mar 12, 2013 at 10:23 AM

Fabulous write Kim! ❤👍😘

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