I feel alone,
Though you are right beside me.
You make me feel strange, odd and unwanted.
I hope it's all inside my head and that you love me really,
For I love you, even though you may not love me.
I need you, I need you, I need you to notice me. Please see me, don't just ignore me like you do. I hope this is all in my head, but I have no proof. Please at least tell me if you hate me, so I can stop wasting my time trying to make you see how I feel.
Alone.
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12 year old writer who isn't enjoying life that much at the moment. Reading is the only thing I can do to forget it all.
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Comments & Feedback (10)
@11orangek aw try not to feel sad it's better to smile cos apparently every time you smile like 2 minutes is added to your life I dunno if it's true but I like the thought
@OfMonstersAndMen it's not that its just... Never mind you'll probably pick it up in my story about my life
@11orangek I probably won't I'm kinda stupid when it comes to picking out stuff like that but I'll have a go lol
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