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A man left his home at the crack of dawn,
As did the doe and her new born fawn.
Both for the same reason,
To nurture their young,
Is it a treason?
If they don't see it as fun?
The doe heard a rustle in the green,
The man treads light and crouches,
As not to be seen.
He raises and aims,
Points and pulls.
The doe gets no time to say goodbye as she falls.
The poor little fawn,
Forced to bolt,
The scene with mother and father at a halt.
They both had a reason to be their that day.
The father had won,
Is it just nature's way?

PoppyA

@PoppyA

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Comments & Feedback (9)

Nicely written but made me cry. Can't handle stories about killing deer. I was traumatized by Bambi

@ckahn ; sorry sweetheart! 💗

Mmmm bet he tasted nice yummy yummy in my tummy lol 🐰🐴🐗🍳🍢🍡mmmmm

@glen ; 👏 for ruining the reflective mood. Sarky sod 😄

@glen ; and what's with the 🐴? 😳

@PoppyA ha it kinda looks like a deer lol

@glen ; a horse looks like a deer? 🐘 that's my new puppy 😄

Aww sad and @glen heartless comes to mind lol 😒😽

@sjw ; well said! & thank you ☺ 💗

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