Crusader kingdom of Jerusalem still in control of the Middle East; terrorist attacks daily, persecution, still, of Muslims and Jews there, expansionist into Syria, Transjordan, Iraq etc. Social commentary on Israeli occupation of Palestine, draw in parallels to modern events.
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