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My imagination is churning fleshy kaleidoscopic sketches of what form stands behind my door.

The body of the monster seems heavy and unstable, like there are too few legs to support its body.

It seems the thing is struggling to breathe.

I'm sitting in the furthest reaches of my room, with my head craned at full the length of my neck. Staring agonisingly at the door.

The smell is indescribable, and chemical like fresh bath water. Not like nature.

The sound it was making was like a howling, only broken up into shorter sharper bounces.

The door opening stopped my lungs.

There it stood, bare pale skin, flat slab like feet. Hairless face and arms, and wrapped in bed cloth.

It swung it's fat limbs towards me, stood on its hind leg. Bared it's teeth grotesquely before grabbing my tail, and yanking me upwards.

It is agony to be hung by your tail. I shrieked and shrieked.

Ah well, now I'm outside in the rubbish eating cereal boxes again.

Shackleton

@Shackleton

Student of science trying to fictionalise.

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Haha! Could have been longer really mate.

Very well written bro, well done

Twist mad you are! @shackleton

Yay, look at that, original works at the top!!!!

Thanks @SuperTry @webster !!!

@Exsample @PortCullister yes I am, and it is good finally yes I agree.

@SuperTry very nice, I agree with Supertry - could extend this into a longer piece! J x

@Zoodark yeah, I guess I need to have more faith in people's patience! Thanks though man.

Cool perspective, really good

Cool

@charlottegrimer @naaviie well 'cool' is certainly call of praise I'll never get used to. Thanks gang!

Brilliant!

@Shackleton haha no worries :P

Wow, haha. This is amazing

@Reine made my day that did.

Like all your others quirky and original but unfortunately I still love ice cream more I'm do sorry 😭💔🍦🍧

@Mysticall how could I possibly compete with ice cream! I really appreciate you reading, I'm very touched.

But only a tiny bit more 😄

You're making me blush.

I just love your stories so much 🍧😊

Is that you talking to two scoops of ice cream there? @Mysticall

Ferry! I didn't know you could write, this stuff is brilliant! Wait till I see you next, Lagertop is it still? @Shackleton Sophie xx

Haha @Knoxious Soph, you owe me a drink! You haven't written a chuffing thing yet?! Pull your finger out.

@Shackleton "kaleidoscopic sketches"? Nice. Very nice.

@powpunch I hoped that wasn't a little too much, I'm glad it worked!

@Shackleton hey, it's an insight on how you visualise... and an interesting one indeed

Of course I'm special and I love ur stories 😜

@powpunch wow that's deep duuuude!

@Mysticall you really are something.

I know I'm unique 😃

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