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Inamorata

Dear Inamorata,

I am tranquil in your quivering eyes,
So modest and pure,
As freshly fallen snow
Upon weary, trembling ground.

Innocence in the warmth of your heart.
True beauty hidden beneath
A nervous and traumatised girl.

Your mirror could never tell
The elegance you carry so paradoxically within your
Unconfident shell.

Hiding your true form from others,
In fear of reproach,
Protecting your Army of
Beauty with one Soldier alone.

Your love is to me
As a blessing in a speechless land;
Like a starving child,
Until you entrusted to me
The honour of calling you mine.

Hidden beauty in all,
But you choose me,
Just a Man, Just a Boy.

Yet your soul calls out to mine,
Deep within,

Lucid,
Undeniable,
Perfect...

Beautiful.

ShaunJenkins

@ShaunJenkins

Please comment if you like my work! I would love to read your mind... I mean thoughts... Same thing... Anyway, I'm a lover of all literary outlets, so I like to try my hand here and there. I am also a Musician (guitarist) and a Composer... of sorts. Peace and Love and Truth to all...

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Comments & Feedback (9)

Flawless.

@CluelessOwl Wow! Really? Thank you so much ๐Ÿ˜Š I'm glad you enjoyed it!

@ShaunJenkins Honestly. Your writing seems so polished and truthful. Very easy and exciting to read.

@CluelessOwl Thank you so much, that means a lot! ๐Ÿ˜Š I feel the same way about your writing, you really capture the emotion of every syllable you use, keep up the excellent writing!!! ๐Ÿ˜Š

@ShaunJenkins Aw, Thankyou. Was meant to be complimenting you :P

@CluelessOwl lol well, credit where credit is due ๐Ÿ˜Š

Awww you're so lovely, this made my cry! I believe every word of what you said, I LOVE YOU โค

@julz awwwww I'm glad you liked it baby ๐Ÿ˜ I love you too โค xxxx

Haha this was sweet very nice and light ๐Ÿ˜Š

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