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Behind Closed Doors

Behind closed doors is a man,

He hides most flaws if he can.

When people look on,

They see nothing's wrong,

But inside his emotions are gone.

Behind closed doors there he stands,

Pretends to himself he's a man,

When people look on,

They see nothing's wrong,

But inside he's afraid to move on.

Behind closed doors with a plan,

To list all the flaws that he can.

The people look on,

Waiting for response,

But inside he don't think that he can.................

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Behind closed doors was a boy,

Who knew his flaws could destroy,

All the things that he loved,

With a huff and a puff,

Still behind closed doors he's a boy.

Stablishβ„’

Stablish

@Stablish

Twenty five year old male from Sudbury, Suffolk, England. I write poetry, quotes, songs and the rare story. Thanks to all who follow, like or re-post xxx

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This is the first time I wrote something personal and started to let some of the darkness out I suppose. This was very hard for me to post at the time but I remember this being the one that kick started it all.

Just realised, is this a limerick :/ ?

Roughly eight months ago, how time flys lol

@Stablish it's kind of a limerick mate. Not what u intended I'm sure! πŸ‘πŸ»

@leelee101 it was one of the firsts so it was just write what sounded to rhymeπŸ˜‰

@Stablish πŸ‘πŸ‘

Your pieces are so poignant yet so concise. Beautiful πŸŒŸπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸŒŸ

@ckahn Aww, thanks so much, this one was a very personal one for me.πŸ’œπŸ’šπŸ’™πŸ˜˜

@Stablish those usually take on quite depth and a life of their own. Don't they?

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