Gone like a bolt,
Vanished with a flash.
Like its my fault !
You're just being rash.
Tried hard to halt,
But couldn't avoid the crash.
Now It burns like you were salt,
Being rubbed into a gash.
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Twenty five year old male from Sudbury, Suffolk, England. I write poetry, quotes, songs and the rare story. Thanks to all who follow, like or re-post xxx
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Comments & Feedback (7)
Ahhh feels like a break up this one ππ captured the sadness and anger too. Just watch out cause I think "your" should be "you're"?
@naaviie that's my bloody Achilles heel. >.< Thanks for the heads up, I may remember this time >. > Yeah it's was a dig back to the pastπ
Yeh took me ages to learn too! Just remember "your" is is belongs to you, "you're" if it is "you are" something? Great write though, that stuff is for editors ππ
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