I'm done with emotions
Like love and like lust
I'm done with devotions
And I'm finished with trust
I'll never again
Go back to those ways
They only bring pain
And I'm done being brave
So I'll plod on instead
Doing what is expected
Using only my head
My heart not connected
And i'll stick to this act
Til the day that I die
Dealing only in fact
No more tears will I cry
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I always said that love was enough It acts a rock when the going gets tough But tables are turning, I'm starting to see That all of this time the joke was on me.
You shot me through the heart With your cool unfeeling words Indifferent, harsh, and cruel What happened to lovebirds. We were beautiful...
Forget him they say. It's easier said than done. Getting him out my mind. Needs a bullet and a gun. The tears of hatred fall. The desire of love fades. I gave my everything.
Why do I hate you. Because I love you. But you couldn't careless, So my life is a mess. Why do I hate you. Because I want you. When I try to make you smile, You drop my heart like it's out if style.
#acrostic. #fictional. Hanging on by a thread of hope,. Each fibre of my heart tore with the words you spoke,. Artfully pained by the break of the heart, you're.
Please can you take my breath away... Please can you help me. I cannot stay. I'm falling weaker, I'm breathing slower.. Depart me from this agonising pain forever. Tell me. Do you have any empathy.
They don't understand, why I sit by you, they don't understand, why I stay away. They think they know everything about you, they think they know why I cruelly care.
I regret the day v met, i regret i time v spent, i regret falling in love,i regret the promises v made,i regret that day from begining to end, i wish this all would hav never happend.....
I like this. I would argue, and as being often disappointed, that much published on here is... Shit. This, however, is refreshingly good.
This is beautiful, I agree with some of the above comments but I am surprised there are not more. So I thought I would make this count for a few. All I have to say is I am a young girl who believes in her dreams and I think you should too. You still have a life to live so don't get buried with whatever happened just think that it is a change; a change that you can change and make good. That's all sorry for your time. Xx
@crowncottage I guess I'll just go on without expectations and maybe one day I might get lucky again ππ
@mattreb10 thank you for taking the time to comment, and for the positivity. This write was more about where I was not so long ago...I'm coming out the other end now (sort of) π
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