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patdolan83
2013-03-16T22:54:14

What's Going On With My Feed!

It seems my Opuss feed is about an hour or two behind so I'm not seeing anyone's posts at the moment....obviously that's not the case for everyone as my posts have been read and responded to within...

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patdolan83
2013-03-16T22:10:41

Swearing? (part2)

Here's another question I want to put to anyone that wants to listen, I have never been in a court of law in my life, but from what I understand when you are part of a trial you are required to swear...

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patdolan83
2013-03-16T18:53:32

Swearing

(This isn't directly about the situation that came about recently) *swearing used but mostly in reference I wanted to know where people stood on the issue of "swearing"?....I think we give...

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patdolan83
2013-03-16T17:51:29

Not All Is What It Seems

#thethreewords. He's breeding dragons. In a lair down by the sea. That evil young man. He paints their scales blue. So to disguise those fire beasts. That evil young man. He trains those dragons.

24 15 43 words
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patdolan83
2013-03-16T01:39:43

Beginning Line

#beginningline #nightdwellers Thank you to the queen of heels and the mistress of the night that is @sjw, I have the glorious honour of hosting this weeks challenge......my line is probably crap but...

30 17 65 words
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patdolan83
2013-03-16T01:14:44

Remythaland

(Each verse to be unbroken when read). Take me to Remythaland.

16 6 90 words
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patdolan83
2013-03-15T23:53:49

In Search Of Calm

#beginninglines. #nightdwellers. Stepping into the unknown. For what I've known was a facade. I've given up on foolish hope. I'm off to find unbroken calm. I take my weary troubled soul.

22 9 96 words
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patdolan83
2013-03-15T20:57:18

Haunted Spirit

#beginninglines #nightdwellers. The moon lit up the cobbles. As though the road were paved with bulbs. Each one shining brightly. Each one seeming breakable. That fragility, was a mirage.

30 14 109 words
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patdolan83
2013-03-15T00:06:10

When

Under the moonlit starry night sky. She shivers and shakes with a tear in her eye. The bridge that she stood on, many times through the years. She's one step away from, but that step she can't bear.

26 11 77 words
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patdolan83
2013-03-14T21:57:34

Memories

#acrostic. No rubbish on the jukebox as we played our own CDs. Oasis for my cousin and the Rice man just for me. Ready with a smile was the man behind the bar.

20 7 43 words
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patdolan83
2013-03-14T16:11:57

Get Your Thank You's Here

I've missed a few thank yous. For reposts and such. In the last day or two. I've been out way too much. So here they all are. Just take what you need. Tomorrow I'm sure. I'll be back up to speed.

30 18 185 words
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patdolan83
2013-03-14T15:19:22

Wonder/Wander With Me

#freewritethatsprobablyshite. I wonder wether wondering, ever won anyone their way. I wondered this not yesterday and I wonder this today.

22 9 21 words
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patdolan83
2013-03-14T15:05:50

Home Games

#acrostic (T)hursdays, of the every other kind (H)eading to pool with one thing on my mind (E)ating that food, that comes to us free (W)edges fish fingers and chips for my tea (O)f course I do...

20 6 64 words
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patdolan83
2013-03-14T14:31:48

Me And Margherita

#acrostic. (T)omato, cheese and a sprinkle of herbs, slices of heaven in truth. (A) delicate art, with an artist at work, they say in the eating's the proof.

16 10 147 words
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patdolan83
2013-03-14T01:10:12

I Need Z's Not Why's

#4lines4fun *swear word ahead I'm tire I'm tired I'm sorry fucking tired So why then oh why Will my eyes not retire.

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patdolan83
2013-03-13T23:28:49

I Used To Love You

#acrostic. (True story). Ready I was to write a piece, to compliment this place. Instead I'm gonna moan a little, about what happened there today. Let me have a j2o and some cheesy chips I asked.

20 12 72 words
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patdolan83
2013-03-13T13:20:50

Sunday Roasts

#acrostic Home made meals, especially the roasts Oh how I love them so Many a Sunday I've sat with my kin Enjoying these moments the most.

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patdolan83
2013-03-13T10:44:16

Need Some Words

#personalchallenge (**thank you all...37 words is plenty I think, along with the others I shall get from friends, family and randoms**) Ok so I've got the urge to write a poem using other people's...

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patdolan83
2013-03-13T00:48:25

Slaying The Demon

(Probably should have put this before, #fiction I don't drink at all). I've not dranken a drop today ma. More like you've not dranken a drop yet so far. There's plenty a time I know you too well.

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patdolan83
2013-03-12T22:37:13

And The Winner Is

#acrostic Could all participants please gather close Or at least grab your ithing to read this here post Many an entry I've received through the day Plenty of brilliance you all did display Let me...

26 30 163 words
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patdolan83
2013-03-12T21:58:14

Three Minute Warning

4lines4fun #acrosticupdate Three minutes to win it That's all you have left Three minutes to win it Not one more or one less.

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patdolan83
2013-03-12T20:10:20

Acrostic Update

#acrosticupdate (updated). (Crappy limerick). It's almost that time my good friends. Two hours, before it comes to an end. The word that I set. Was "complete" don't forget.

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patdolan83
2013-03-12T15:48:37

Give Me Control

#acrostic. #post666. Come a little closer, I promise not to bite. Open up your world to me, gift to me your life. Make your soul available, for me to mould at will.

26 16 83 words
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patdolan83
2013-03-12T12:00:05

My Sweet Cherie

*inspired in part by Edgar Allan Poe's Annabel Lee Of all the girls I ever knew None compared to Cherie Bleu In many ways I'd known a few But none as well as Cherie Bleu Cherie Bleu the boys all...

16 10 132 words
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patdolan83
2013-03-12T01:50:48

Sweet Cherry

Of all the girls I ever knew. None quite compared to Cherry Blue. Not one came close to Cherry's grace. Nor match did they her wanton ways. Sweet Cherry knew she blew my mind.

14 6 65 words
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patdolan83
2013-03-11T23:32:45

New Acrostic Word

Well I am truly grateful to @sarahgamal for choosing my write out of the many wonderful offerings from the many wonderful artists who entered this comp......I nearly didn't post that piece as well,...

24 13 118 words
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patdolan83
2013-03-11T19:30:17

My Moonlit Sky Lover

#acrostic. Stolen moments, in which I found love and she found love. Every second that we could grab, was not enough...was never enough.

36 17 77 words
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patdolan83
2013-03-11T18:03:50

Welcome Ye Not The Secrets Of Others

#acrostic. Should ye learn another's truth, hold it dear don't let it loose. Envy ye not the ones who know, another's deepest darkest woe.

16 7 74 words
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patdolan83
2013-03-11T16:08:48

Keeping Secrets

#acrostic. S-he laid in him, her every trust. E-xactly all she ever could. C-hose to give him all she was. R-elying on him to keep it close. E-xactly what this man did do.

22 4 41 words
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patdolan83
2013-03-11T15:59:42

She Knows Me Too Well

#acrostic. She opened up a part of me and swore to keep it safe. Encouraged I to let it free and have in she some faith. Came the day she chose to leave she stole my trust away.

20 10 6 words
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patdolan83
2013-03-11T00:50:37

She Had

#notanacrostic The eyes that stole my heart and soul The lips that broke my hearts resolve The hands that took my cautious touch The feet that walked from this fools love.

20 7 31 words
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patdolan83
2013-03-11T00:34:17

Kept

#acrostic. Something hidden within my psych. Evading exposure, withdrawn from all sight. Choking me almost, as it tries to escape. Remain though it shall, no matter the pain.

20 7 45 words
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patdolan83
2013-03-11T00:13:03

Broken Trust

#acrostic. S.lips off my tongue, as I break my promise. E.scapes with one breath through these treacherous lips. C.rumbling your trust with one foolish mistake.

14 7 48 words
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patdolan83
2013-03-10T19:38:54

Forever Flame

#acrostic. Two flames become one and gather as such. Wind can't blow them out, there's none strong enough. Incandescently they burn when the fires combine.

34 13 74 words
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patdolan83
2013-03-10T18:50:58

Mum/Mother/Mummy

(A little rhyme I wrote in my mums card). To mum. Thank you for being there and all the things that you've done. To mother. If given the choice I wouldn't choose any other. To mummy.

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patdolan83
2013-03-10T16:38:45

The Myth

#acrostic #wrongword Lets tackle shall we the subject head on Of two souls together forever as one Very much a rare creature for sure Even when found, many reject what they'd searched for.

24 12 31 words
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patdolan83
2013-03-10T03:05:58

It's A Small World

I knew a man from Pakistan. Who knew a woman from Japan. She had a cousin in Tibet. Who holidayed once in Quebec. It's there he met his loving bride. Half Canadian on her fathers side.

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patdolan83
2013-03-10T01:34:42

Spring

So much changes when spring finds its way. Pass do the whites and the dankly dull greys. Remain does the rain but the sunshine comes with. In a splendorous fashion, that the flowers shall live.

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patdolan83
2013-03-09T21:52:45

Falling For Spring

#acrostic. #justtwothistime. So the leaves they return and the flowers do to. Part does the winter for months seven plus two. Red yellow and purples replace the white and the greys.

38 16 85 words
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patdolan83
2013-03-09T19:30:45

Hope Springs

#acrostic. #maybealittletooooolong. (S)ummer has been and gone, autumn and winter too have passed, alas dear spring please save my soul, may this season be not my last.

26 15 207 words
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patdolan83
2013-03-09T01:25:48

A Man

The bravest man. Isn't the man in the trench with his brothers. It's the man that stands alone with no other. It's not the man in reach of a trigger. It's the man who booms his righteous voice bigger.

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patdolan83
2013-03-08T21:33:42

Seriously!??

#acrostic. Habits of people are changed by what's read. On the writers predictions their will is then lead. Random creations the author makes up. Of things that might happen, of money and love.

32 13 77 words
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patdolan83
2013-03-08T15:27:25

A Woman's Requests

#internationalwomensday A man may ask me to stand and fight I'll request his reasons or bark.

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patdolan83
2013-03-08T15:07:48

A Woman To Me

#internationalwomensday A woman A woman is...........

26 15 142 words
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patdolan83
2013-03-08T14:21:07

Friday Fun

#FridayFun #nightdwellers It slides close to me, a chill wraps up my spine, A ghostly presence haunting me, clawing at my mind.

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patdolan83
2013-03-08T02:26:25

The Hunter

Dressed to impress. But she's all on her own. He follows from a distance. On the path to her home. He moves a little closer. As she moves through the dark. Unavoidable shadows.

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patdolan83
2013-03-07T14:09:17

Not Later But Now

#acrostic #lastone Reality = death Eternity = lies Life = a quest Impossible = flight God = stories Immortality = vanity Opportunity = glory Now = your sanity.

18 14 26 words
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patdolan83
2013-03-07T13:37

Destination

#acrostic. Realms of Heaven Hell and Earth. Each has it's time and has its turn. Leaving Earth either up or down. In Limbo some will stick around. Gaining souls at mindless rates.

28 11 48 words
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patdolan83
2013-03-07T13:09:54

Both Sides

#acrostic Remember, Everybody Lives In a deity's Graces, In an Order Never accidental Really. Everyones Life Is one of Gods Incredibly Original Novels?.

18 12 19 words
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patdolan83
2013-03-07T01:08:52

Just Look

It's written in the sky with clouds. It's written in a child's smile. It's written in the flowers too. It's written in the morning dew. It's everywhere you choose to see.

40 13 55 words
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patdolan83
2013-03-06T21:08:21

Short Sighted Terry

#4lines4fun #littlesense. Terry the T-Rex who had to wear specs. Was worried the dinos would lose all respect. So he bought contact lenses to wear them instead.

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patdolan83
2013-03-06T20:41:29

Thank You All

A blanket of thanks. I bestow on Opussia. For todays repost.

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patdolan83
2013-03-06T16:57:54

Lacklustre

#acrostic. *a chance I've misunderstood the word. More and more I lose all hope. Each morning it's harder to rise. Light seems so dull and ever so bleak. An emptiness I hold inside.

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patdolan83
2013-03-06T16:17:52

Priceless

A rich man offered me a dollar. He offered me a pound. He offered me a Euro. I turned the rich man down. A poor man offered me a story. He offered me advice. He offered me his wisdom.

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patdolan83
2013-03-06T16:06:13

Swingers

#4lines4fun #blameleelee A little bit of trivia, to get you through the day Did you know that monkeys, are 73 percent gay I think that numbers slightly off I'm sure they swing both ways.

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patdolan83
2013-03-06T15:59:01

What Are The Chances

#4lines4fun Lesbians all women are Or at least the ones I've met They tell me this right at the start Thats just my luck/look I guess.

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patdolan83
2013-03-06T15:41:20

One Day A Week

#4lines4fun I only eat on Tuesdays But on Tuesdays I do feast On Wednesday through to Monday though My stomach probably hates me.

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patdolan83
2013-03-06T15:38:31

My Dog/My Frog

#4lines4fun I once had a dog Who like to hump frogs I once had a frog Who didn't like dogs.

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patdolan83
2013-03-06T15:29:53

Prick No More

#4lines4fun #nonsense My uncle Rick chopped off his dick Just to prove them wrong "Your just a prick" the girls would quip Well now that prick has gone.

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patdolan83
2013-03-06T15:19:25

True Story

#4lines4fun A little story for you I swear that it's true Today for some stew Came round my aunt Sue.

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patdolan83
2013-03-06T15:15:04

Help!

#4lines4fun Here's the situation, I need a big poo But I'm too bloody lazy to get up and move I'm too scared to fart, I might follow through So please won't you tell me, what can I do?.

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patdolan83
2013-03-06T00:49:17

Missing You

Please wake me in the morn. Before you take your leave. Not a minute we should waste. When you're close I need not sleep. I need your eyes. I need your lips. I need your gaze. I need your kiss.

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patdolan83
2013-03-05T22:22:52

The Laughing Giraffe

The laughing giraffe. Would laugh most in the bath. Would laugh at the tub and would laugh at the taps. Would laugh in the water. Wether cold warm or hot. Would laugh and keep laughing.

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patdolan83
2013-03-05T20:59:59

Remorseless

Cloaked in darkness he makes his move. Chokes his victim her breath he removes. Wearing gloves to leave no mark. Sparing no malice he has not a heart. Dropping the lifeless shell he takes leave.

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patdolan83
2013-03-05T18:48:37

Moo

Maisy the cow, no matter what mood Would moo in the morning and all the day through She'd moo in the sunshine she'd moo in the rain She'd moo on the now and on every again.

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patdolan83
2013-03-05T12:54:30

Story Coming

*A snippet of something I'm writing about two people who meet at a wishing well.

22 5 67 words
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patdolan83
2013-03-05T01:51:53

The Spirits

#acrostic not sure if it fits (M)any things remain unknown (Y)ou may not believe in things such as ghosts (S)ome folks though, swear they exist (T)hey tell you their stories of spirits that...

24 12 80 words
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patdolan83
2013-03-05T00:21:36

My Dream Girl

Welcome to my nightmare. Just step right in there's room to spare. It's dark I know and kind of eerie. Don't be afraid it's not too scary. There are ghouls of course and monsters too.

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patdolan83
2013-03-04T19:21:56

I Hate Notts

#acrostic. #fakehate. Nothing to do, bored out my mind. On mornings noon and every night. The town is barren, no soul to be seen. This really is a one man scene. I can not stand this awful place.

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patdolan83
2013-03-04T18:53:28

My Bliss

#acrostic. Never have I felt at home. On the different soils I have roamed. Take me back to Nottingham. To have the chance to breathe again. In time I'm sure I'll see the world.

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patdolan83
2013-03-04T18:37:38

Nottingham

#acrostic. (N)ot enough that I could say. (O)n one piece of paper or Opuss page. (T)o sum up just how much I love. (T)he city where my heart grew up. (I)'ve walked the streets, crossed every bridge.

18 12 71 words
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patdolan83
2013-03-04T15:47:13

Notts So Beautiful

#acrostic #limerick Never once have I found a new place Only Notts my heart will embrace The other city's I've seen The many places I've been Size up not to her beauty and grace.

12 8 32 words
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patdolan83
2013-03-04T15:10:49

Home

#acrostic. No need at all to leave this place. Only love I hold at heart. The city which I call my home. The place in which my life did start. I hold it close, it holds me too. No place I'd rather be.

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patdolan83
2013-03-04T02:29:05

I Love To Rhyme

I love I do to rhyme it's true. There's nothing that I'd rather do. Not rather would I like to swim. Not watch tv, I'd rather sing. Songs that rhyme I love the most. I love the way a chorus goes.

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patdolan83
2013-03-03T21:02:05

Read The Lyrics And Guess The Song If You Think You Know It

Because I'm The ginger one's number one fan, it is my turn to pick a song. Here's the lyrics "Pour a little salt, we were never here" Easy peasy one...but don't shout out, that's just rude ;).

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patdolan83
2013-03-03T16:58:33

The Bells Have Rung

#sundayrepost. From the dearly departed phrase comp I do believe. I fear my kin. My time has come. My songs been sang. My death knell rung. My flame that flickers. Shall soon burn out.

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patdolan83
2013-03-03T16:25:19

School Is Hell

#acrostic. One I forgot to post. Sludging through the hallways. Corridors of dread. Harbouring such fear and hate. Of where these halls do head. Open doors of hell to me. Locked inside all day.

20 2 56 words
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patdolan83
2013-03-03T14:44:50

Common Denominator

#commondenominator Because I am such a genius it is my turn.... Your words are Corn and field Tell me if you want to guess Clue time........think war.

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patdolan83
2013-03-03T02:58:04

Cruel Days

#acrosticbutnotinrightcontext. #antibullying. So you want to hear about my school days. Children and their childish ways. Having fun at my expense. Oh I'm sure no ill was meant.

24 8 69 words
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patdolan83
2013-03-03T01:40:15

Not Interested

#acrostic. Solemn walks both back and forth. Cold winter days the worst. Half way there was half way back. On occasion I almost turned. Once arriving my nightmare would then start.

24 7 12 words
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patdolan83
2013-03-02T23:58:11

Too Hot For School

#acrostic. Science on a sunny day. Could they be more cruel. Hate biology anyway. Oh must we go to school. Outside is where we'd rather be. Let us go please would you. Don't you see the sun is free.

16 6 39 words
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patdolan83
2013-03-02T09:44:12

I Was

#acrostic. Somewhere in the middle of the. Cool kids groups and the outcasts. Hanging around in chess club. Or skipping lessons to go to the arcade. Often I would try to say as.

26 13 69 words
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patdolan83
2013-03-02T00:18:23

Memories

If I could I'd chose to lose. The memories that I can't refuse. The ones that keep me up at night. The ones I try but can not fight. I'd let the surgeons rip them out.

26 7 57 words
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patdolan83
2013-03-01T22:36:09

We Need The Rain

#natureacrostic So the sun didn't shine today you say Unfair I know.

24 18 54 words
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patdolan83
2013-03-01T16:07:57

Name The Song

In honour of my mothers birthday I am going to choose a song by her favourite singer/band. "You want commitment. Take a look into these eyes. They burn with a fire. Till the end of time.

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patdolan83
2013-03-01T11:53:27

??

#natureacrostic. #moreexperiments(13571357). Sitting. Underneath the sun. Nothing seems to matter much. Life just how it's meant to be. Ignoring. Grown up problems. Having some precious time away.

20 5 33 words
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patdolan83
2013-03-01T03:38:13

Quietly

#anotherbleakwrite Quietly she wonders Does anybody listen Does she even exist at all Would anybody miss her Quietly she drifts away Bit by bit Day by day Quietly she bleeds............

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patdolan83
2013-02-28T15:43:48

Opuss Post 600

600 in about six months. That seems quite a score. Half of them are acrostic writes. leelee's fault I'm sure. But 300 is still quite high. That's fifty a month all told.

22 7 70 words
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patdolan83
2013-02-28T01:53:51

Good Night

Good night my sweets. Only dream the sweetest dreams. Only wake to pleasant scenes. Delight in all there is to see. Neglect the things that stay your wake. In hours when it needs to shake.

22 6 48 words
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patdolan83
2013-02-27T21:42:12

Too Young To Love

#natureacrostic. #anexperiment (diditwork?) *I forgot to mention, I was watching Twilight Eclipse when writing this. Shoulders unweighted newly lived, I give her time.

30 21 46 words
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patdolan83
2013-02-27T20:16:12

Basking

#natureacrostic #partoneof?.

26 18 67 words
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patdolan83
2013-02-27T01:30:44

Cats Need To Be Cats

(Completely free write). A cat and a mouse sit for supper one day. They have a wonderful time. Before the cat turns to say. "You know that I have to". "I'm sorry it's true". "I simply just have to".

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patdolan83
2013-02-27T00:46:52

The View

(Probably not finished, not sure to be honest). Down by the riverbank. Where the fellas be spent from the cider they've drank. And the empty bottles mount up on the grass. As the night settles in.

16 8 80 words
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patdolan83
2013-02-26T21:24:37

My Angel

#acrostic A mere mention of her name Makes the drums begin to play On the chance I catch her gaze Unwasted moments of a tasted haze Reminds me of my place......beneath her grace.

30 14 7 words
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patdolan83
2013-02-26T20:36:41

Roxanne

#acrostic. *15+ a little bit strange and nonsensical. (A) more a more a more of amour. (M)any a men who have fell..how they fall. (O)ccasional meets for the occasionally weak.

22 11 57 words
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patdolan83
2013-02-26T14:47:38

Amour

#acrostic A Marriage Of Unbridled Romance.

20 7 6 words
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patdolan83
2013-02-26T14:18:40

Her Power

#acrostic A n illicit and somewhat immoral affair M énages and trysts it was lust without care O ccasional looks mistakable for love U nder her whip I just couldn't get enough R equests that she...

24 12 40 words
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patdolan83
2013-02-26T01:28:51

At Her Whim

#acrostic Adrift in her ocean Marooned at her shore Occasional motion but left yearning more Unworth her devotion Restrained to amour.

22 9 21 words
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patdolan83
2013-02-26T00:31:40

Enthralled

#acrostic. (A)bsolutely enthralled in all that she is. (M)elting completely when our lips meet to kiss. (O)n to my knees, I fall at her beauty and grace. (U)nder her spell and addicted to her taste.

24 18 44 words
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patdolan83
2013-02-26T00:04:12

The Wall

The wall that stands between us now. Was built too strong to be torn down. Was built too high for us to climb. Was built too wide to get around. The wall was built by you alone.

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