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I Love You More(fin)

I love you
Like the moon loves the night
Like the sun loves blue skies
Like the sea loves the shore
No.......I love you more

I love you
Like Romeo loved Juliet
Like mums love Wet Wet Wet
Like carpets love the floor
No.......I love you even more

I love you
Like spotters love their trains
Like sadists love their pain
Like gluttons love a little more
No.......I love you more I'm sure

I love you
Like paper loves ink
Like monkeys love to swing
Like a lion loves to roar!
No......I love you so so so much more

I'll love you 'til
My sail can find no wind
My planet no longer spins
My mind has lost it's will
No wait....I'll love you longer still

I'll love you 'til
My eternity has passed
My flag is at half mast
Of breath I've had my fill
Oh no my sweet...I'll love you even longer still

patdolan83

@patdolan83

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Comments & Feedback (11)

@eddie12309 here's some cheese as promised ๐Ÿ˜...I might add to it

I'm liking the traditional cheese. Yep... Seems a wee bit unfinished โค

I guess a little unfinished... Idk but I love it!!! The concept is great.

@eddie12309 @pennygirl21 thank you thank you....I will be finishing it soon thank you for the RPs ๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜

@minxymolly thank you for the RP ๐Ÿ˜˜

@sammielee46 thank you for the RP ๐Ÿ˜˜

@sarahgamal thank you for the RP ๐Ÿ˜˜

@leelee101 thanks for the RP mate ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿป๐Ÿป

@paintingskies thank you for the kind RP ๐Ÿ˜˜

@eddie12309 @pennygirl21 a little late but it's finished, thought you might like to see ๐Ÿ˜

๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘ some more virtual likes. Finishes it off nicely. โค

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