How Do I Stop?

patdolan83 • 367 followers

I wish to forget my feelings towards you
DO you even remember the ones you felt too
NOT even for a second have you showed that you cared
WANT for each other is what I thought we shared
TO get what I need will take inner strength
LOVE is an emotion that resonates at such length
YOU hurt me so much because of the words that were said
ANYMORE of this hurt and my ink might turn red

#emotional-poetry #general #heartbreak #unrequited-love

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Comments & Feedback (5)

Sep 25, 2012 at 9:23 PM

Great write, love the double-up in the wording 👏👏👏💚💜💚

Sep 25, 2012 at 9:34 PM

Yes CAPS very effective adds to the emotion. 👏👏💚

Sep 25, 2012 at 10:03 PM

Very emotional write 👏❤💗❤

Sep 25, 2012 at 10:20 PM

Wow, very cleverly written. It flowed well and I loved the second message communicated with the capital letters 💜

Sep 25, 2012 at 10:34 PM

Thank you all...your time and comments are a great comfort

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