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An Angel And A Fool

There once
was a beautiful fair maiden
Who lived
on my street down the way
With hair
as bright as the sun
And eyes green
with a little tint of grey

She floated
with the wind at her heels
Walking
like she's wading through a cloud
There's a sound
when she moves like a humming
And her shadow
dances behind her on the ground

Her mind,soul
and her heart are as one
She lives
with love flowing through her veins
Her world calm
like the stillest of oceans
She hasn't
ever known any hate

This angel
is the epitome of beauty
This angel
is as perfect as they come
This fool
let her leave without telling
That this fool
with this angel was in love

patdolan83

@patdolan83

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Comments & Feedback (6)

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Nicely written Pat, it too easy to keep your feeling inside and later wish you would have said them everyday😔

This is lovely but tinged with sadness 😔😘

Great write Hun 👏✨❤👏✨❤👏✨❤👏

@leelee101 @Stablish @sjw @misslittleDHP thanks all 😊....this is an exaggerated piece about girl when i was 15

And thanks for all the reposts 😌

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