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Take It All

You can have my all
For all it's worth
You can have my height
You can have my girth
You can have my thoughts
You can have my dreams
You can have the stitches
From my seams

You can have the things
That make me me
My inspiration
My dignity
My confidence
My zest, my zeal
And all the things
That make me real

And if you agree
You can have my pain
My nightmares
And my honest shame
My memories
Of hurt that's passed
And all the faults
I have amassed

It's simple
But I swear it's true
Every piece of me's
for you
There's only one thing
I ask from thee
Your acceptance
Of every part of me

patdolan83

@patdolan83

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Comments & Feedback (10)

Really like this :) good job

Thank you....I have to say you might have just broken the record for quickest ever comment and like 😊....I appreciate itπŸ‘

It was the first thing i saw in the feed and looked interesting :) glad i read it! :)

Really like it mate, great writeπŸ‘πŸ‘

@Stablish cheers mate

That was awesome I loved it :)

πŸ‘πŸ‘ Great piece Pat πŸ‘

Great job. I really liked some of your rhyming there. Keep it up.

Love this

@FriendToAnimals @leelee101 @Camdonius @chickgamer thanks all, your comments are appreciated 😊

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