Days Of Doubt

patdolan83 • 367 followers

Good day

I'm never less than brilliant
At all tasks I take on
I'm amazing at computer games
At drawing I'm the don
I'm a genius with my word play
With a cue I am the "one"
I'm never less than outstanding
At all tasks I take on

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Normal day

I'm never more than average
In anything I do
I'm okay at computer games
Not bad at drawing too
I'm so-so with all word play
And quite good with a cue
I'm never more than moderate
At anything I do

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Bad day

I'm useless and I'm worthless
I'm gonna stay in bed
No point in even getting dressed
I may as well be dead

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My last day

I should have lived
Whilst I could
My self doubt
Did me no good

I could have lived

#general #inner-dialogue #mental-health #personal-growth #self-reflection

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Comments & Feedback (11)

Jan 30, 2013 at 1:49 PM

👏👏👏🍻

Jan 30, 2013 at 1:52 PM

@leelee101 cheers mate 🍻 I appreciate the RP 👍🍻

Jan 30, 2013 at 1:53 PM

Wish I had more good days 👏👏

Jan 30, 2013 at 1:55 PM

@chickgamer don't we all 😔...thanks for the RP 😘

Jan 30, 2013 at 2:10 PM

Nicely done👏👏👏

Jan 30, 2013 at 2:12 PM

@sarahgamal thank you Sarah 😊...and for the kind RP 😘

Jan 30, 2013 at 2:47 PM

Great idea for a poem love it 👏👏👏😘

Jan 30, 2013 at 2:49 PM

Thank you @sjw 😊....and thanks for the RP 😘

Jan 30, 2013 at 5:53 PM

@sammielee46 thanks for the lovely RP 😘

Jan 31, 2013 at 12:06 AM

We're reading from the same hymn sheet I think Brother😉

Jan 31, 2013 at 12:12 AM

@Stablish I guess it's good to know you're not the only one....thanks for the RP mate

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