The green grass
Remembers you
The colourful flowers
Remember you too
The glorious sun
Could never forget
Such a beautiful sight
It never had met
The sun and the clouds
And the moon and the stars
All climb to the skies
To find where you are
And the birds that come out
To sing their sweet songs
Do so in hope
That you sing along
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Lay under the tree of a thousand stars, It's beauty unmatched by Venus and Mars. The soft white flowers twinkle in the night, Showing their wonder, shining so bright.
The sky's on fire with red and green, A mass of colours I've never seen. I woke at dawn and here I stand, The moon and sun, both hand in hand.
Eerily, beautiful jade lights dance over the glistening, white sapphire pools. Emerald illumination sparkles on the icy, ivory snow. Ribbons of curling viridian patterned the frozen night.
Love this! I would just call it Orpheus and let people figure it out. :P also, were you going to end the last line with a period? Without one it feels like you were going to write more.
@Lhyrre thanks for the advice....I never like to end my writes, I like leaving them open for some reason....probably because I hate to see things I am vested in end
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