I Wish I Was...

patdolan83 • 367 followers

I wish I was a butterfly
As graceful as can be

I wish I was a killer whale
I'd own the deep blue sea

I wish I was a Tamarin
Swinging tree to tree

I wish I was a crocodile
With my big sharp teeth

I wish I was a stallion
I'd bound majestically

I wish I was an albatross
Soaring oh so free

I wish I was just one of these
I wish I wasn't me
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I Wish I Was....(2)

I wish I was a butterfly
I wish I was a bee
I wish I was a killer whale
(I wish I wasn't me)

I wish I was in Uruguay
Or maybe in Zaire
I wish I was in Italy
(I wish I wasn't here)

#animal-transformation #general #identity #imagination #poetry #self-discovery

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