(This is my very first poem; I have never written poetry before, not even when I was at school. I'm 23 now and felt that I should give it a try.)
The time has come
To leave this place,
Close my eyes
And drift into space,
Free to dream
In peaceful slumber,
Floating on clouds,
Up and under,
Through narrow streets
And open fields,
My inner desires
Shall be revealed,
Until it's time
For me to wake,
And my dreams dissolve
Like a fallen snowflake.
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23 year old guy, lost and trying to find himself. . P.s. check out my awesome wife @Bethibella for awesome writings. :)
Whenever I'm inspired I pen a little note, And read through all the words that I have somehow wrote.
Remember those feelings the way the trees and the leaves sway graciously in the wind The way the leaves fall effervescently to the floor it does implore an essence to explore A deeper meaning So...
R eally fed up of how I am. E nough I say, change of plan. C an't afford, to waste more time, L ive for today, I hear it chime. U nknown glories await in line, S o board of being a recluse.
I dreamed a dream last night. Message vivid, colours bright. An Opuss dream it was, I'm sure. If I could remember it at all. I can't remember even a snippet. With my coffee as I sip it.
I had an epiphany,. Retrieved clarity,. I've never known my worth,. Or what my place is on earth,. I've never been happy being me,. I've felt worthless and ugly,. Strived to get perfection,.
Do I look like a book. Can you read me like a book. Then why do you only look at my cover. Don't judge a book by its cover.
In search of inspiration We all have it at times Writers block Then Bam.
I like to think I know it all, I like to think I'm ace, (Okay, I'm pretty awesome,) But there's still some empty space.
20 years, studying for a bachelor in English, living life with my wonderful boyfriend.
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Aspiring writer. 15 years young with plenty more to go <3
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