Thank you to the queen of heels and the mistress of the night that is @sjw, I have the glorious honour of hosting this weeks challenge......my line is probably crap but here it is........
Creeping silently under the veil of night
The deadline is next Friday at midnight.
Put the tags up please people and mention me in the comments of your piece. Happy writing!
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Comments & Feedback (17)
Congrats Patπ looks like a promising line. You can be sure I'll enter a piece or twoπ but right now; tiredπ€π€π€
Congrats ππ I like the line. I'll probably enter this one since I have plenty of time to do it (:
Congrats Pat, I had a sneaky suspicion you'd win (deservingly so), but didn't want to jinx you so didn't write it in your comments. I suspected it prob was a close call with your piece & @RichWithey 's ghost ship - @sjw was it a tough call? I'm just curious now lol. Congrats again & great line. πβ¨
@yikici it was a tough call I couldn't decide whether I liked Rich's spell check or the the poem the most, so I guess he got 2nd for both pieces lol, but pats just nailed it πππ
@evilfingerz cheers mate...I look forward to reading what you come up with...and thanks for the kind RP π
@Jamtots cheers...and you better enter now that I know you've got no excuse π...thanks for the RP π
@yikici thank you π...I can honestly say with no exaggeration that I never for a second expected to win π³...many thanks for the lovely RP π
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