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Sold a lie
Such a price
Left me broken
Heart and mind
In a heap
On the floor
Wounds running deep
Whole body's sore

Left a shell
Devoid of hope
Dreams became nightmares
Few words spoke
Accepted the darkness
Shunned the light
Chased by day
Captured by night

patdolan83

@patdolan83

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