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Lacklustre

*a chance I've misunderstood the word

More and more I lose all hope
Each morning it's harder to rise
Light seems so dull and ever so bleak
An emptiness I hold inside
No energy at all it's so hard to move
Crunched up here on my bed
Holding this shape for hours on end
On a pillow unchanged is my head
Life gives me nothing, to motivate
Youth is a gift..but mine is a waste

patdolan83

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Comments & Feedback (8)

πŸ‘ Love this😘

No I think you've got it mate πŸ‘πŸ‘β˜•

@patdolan83 absolutely brilliant write,πŸ‘πŸ‘ŒπŸ‘

πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘ good one

Awesome, nailed itπŸ‘πŸ‘

Top drawer my man. πŸ˜ŠπŸ‘πŸ‘

@emjez @leelee101 @shaheenashapeenur @LiSaC64 @Stablish @TheCodsPollocks thank you all for your lovely comments and for any reposts πŸ˜ŠπŸ‘

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