C an't you see she's struggling?
H ow can you not see the pain?
A ll these lies, fake alibis,
L oop ropes around her brain.
L iving is a burden,
E ven she can't cope.
N o-one willing to lend a hand?
G uide her through an unknow land?
E ventually the world seems to harshen,
S ometimes even the strongest can lose hope.
How did you like this story?
Your feedback helps Platypus understand what's working
@Platypus
Lines ever more unclear, Not sure I'm even here...
Similar Stories
Comments & Feedback (9)
This is excellent hun. ๐๐ but, the word is 'challenges' so if you can squeeze a line starting with 'S' on the end, it'll be perfect... ๐โค
@Platypus if you can't make it work with an 'S' then don't do it hun. It's still a great piece without it. ๐โค๐
Want to join the conversation? Sign in to leave a comment.