Granddads Advice

patdolan83 • 367 followers

(First opuss I think)

My grandad did tell me on many occasions
Women are not worth your money time or patience
I used to just nod and simply agree
Because I knew that no woman would ever want me

But you came along and made me believe
That I could be someone somebody could need
At the start, I honestly didn't think it was true
But you said it so often that i trusted you

But then on one evening you just walked away
Out of my life without much to say
I don't believe that all women are alike
But I guess in your case...my grandad was right

#betrayal #general #heartbreak #relationship-poetry

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Comments & Feedback (9)

Dec 29, 2012 at 9:26 PM

@glen my first opuss I believe, I had to scroll back through 300 odd to find out 😒 😜

Dec 29, 2012 at 9:35 PM

Ha least you started on a bright note 😜 sad, but good mate 😃👏🎸

Dec 29, 2012 at 9:40 PM

Sad but great write honey 😘❤👏🍺

Dec 29, 2012 at 10:03 PM

Great write Pat 👍👏👏

Dec 29, 2012 at 10:54 PM

Lovely and I remember this one I think! ☺

Dec 29, 2012 at 10:56 PM

I remember this one 😔

Dec 30, 2012 at 8:52 AM

Great! 👏👏👏👏

Dec 30, 2012 at 4:51 PM

@glen @sammielee46 @leelee101 @crowncottage @sjw @rhona cheers all....I think this got 4 likes the first time around 😆

Dec 30, 2012 at 8:00 PM

WordPerfect ,, as usual 🚬🍷

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