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Secrets Told

I told you my secret
But that was a mistake
For your syrupy words
Turned out to be fake

I trusted you
To keep my secret well
I trusted you
To never ever tell

And now you have told
My secret to the world
Sliced me open
My soul has been unfurled

I gave you my heart
You treated it like dirt
And you'll never understand
How much my life will hurt

I loved you,
Once.

All rights reserved. Nom 18th January 2013.

Nom

@Nom

Life's a mystery.

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Comments & Feedback (9)

This is a fictional continuation of my previous poem...

I was gonna say, what a crap situation😱😱 Great write👏👏👏

So glad it's fictional! Great write!✨👍✨😘

Glad it's a fictional follow up mate. Good stuff 👍🍻

@Stablish i know, I thought I'd better add that. Thank you :)

@ckahn thank you :)

@leelee101 thanks :)

Oh phew -was worried for a second. Nice poem. 🌟

@yikici thank you

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