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Weightless

If I let it all out
Will I be weightless enough
For the wind to take me away

If I open a vein
And spill out this hate
Will I fly for the rest of my days

If I unshackled myself
From these chains of confusion
Could I finally get out of the dark

If the chains do fall off
Will I be clean with ablutions
Or forever be haunted by the scars

patdolan83

@patdolan83

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Comments & Feedback (6)

It's gotta be 'Weightless' mate IMO 👍 Great piece.

Agree with @leelee101 😘👏

"Scared for now" ?? Scarred? Lol

If... 😘

@leelee101 @sammielee46 @smellyfingers @sjw thanks all 😊....I had the same thought @leelee101 😄, and @sjw as Mr Kipling has already written the greatest poem of all time and titled it If...I won't go there

@patdolan83 👍 it was in the piece all the time mate. It stood out for me, and worked for every verse. Glad to see it's got a title Pat. 👏👏

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