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Remember The Dandelions

Do you remember the grass
How it blew in the wind
And the dandelions
That scattered in spring

Do you remember the rain
How it showered but still
We'd remain where we sat
Queen and king

Do you remember the winters
How cold it would get
So we huddled together
So close

Do you remember that kiss
That soft sweet first kiss
We shared
Before innocence was lost

Do you remember our hearts
Beating like drums
As we lay side by side
In the field

Do you remember the moon
And the stars up above
The first time
That it all became real

Do you remember the joy
Before all the pain
Do you remember the sunshine
Before all the rain
Do you remember the laughter
Before all the tears
Do you remember we loved
Do you remember we cared

Do you remember we started
To notice the rain
In winter we'd part
Instead of huddling again

Do you remember the drums
Disappeared from our scenes
We realised how awkward
Silence could be

Do you remember that night
The last time that we spoke
Do you remember together
Our hearts softly broke

Do you remember you told me
We can always be friends
I hurt too much for that
I just can't pretend

Please remember I love you
Please remember that true
Please remember the good times
Please forget the bad few

Please forget all the tears
And all the bad things
Just remember the dandelions
That scattered in spring

patdolan83

@patdolan83

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Comments & Feedback (19)

Thank you @sammielee46 for the lovely RP 😘

Awwww 👏❤😘

@sarahgamal thank you 😊...and thank you for the lovely RP 😘

👏👏👏👏👏❤ Great stuff Pat 👍🍻

@leelee101 cheers mate 😊....and thank you for the RP 👍🍻

@MinxyMolly thanks for the kind RP 😘

Lovely... :)

This is truly beautiful! ☺😽

This is truly lovely! Nice flow, great imagery and very poignant💗😔💗

Excellent 🎷🎸👌

@Barknbite thank you 😊 and thank you for the RP

@crowncottage I am so glad you liked it, thank you for the lovely comment and RP 😊😘

@ckahn your comment has made me smile 😊 thank you and for the RP 😘

@glen cheers mate! And thanks for the RP 👍

Well, we're even then cuz your piece truly moved me😘

Wow, perfect mate👏💜👏

@Stablish 😊 cheers mate and thank you for the RP 🍻👍

@yamaarashi thank you so much for the RP 😊

@annasofia thank you for the kind RP 😊

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