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A Field I Know

There is a field I know,
Barley, hay and wild flower,
A space so vast, it creates loops
Around me; rolling clouds, and
Hollow sounds magnificent,
Waiting to be filled with singers
Singing, drummers drumming,
Lovers loving.
I remember you in this field.
I remember you dancing.
Rain washes away footsteps
Snow buries them, my dreams
Are here, my regrets too, I
Was so lost in this field I
Couldn't let go or help myself
And I come back here sometimes,
I punish myself; close my eyes,
Imagine you near, my tears
I remember them of joy
I remember them of love
The sea below us, the sky above
The cliffs where we made sweet love
The promenade, we walked that night
You, and I, bound in island moonlight
The ocean only a dance away,
Us a message in a bottle so brave,
Thrown out into love's careless wave,
Washed away, but occasionally I hope
You see those beautiful words,
You dream that time again,
Revealed in the tide that ebbs
And flows beneath this field I know

jackalice

@jackalice

I can feel the world in my lungs. Breathe with me....

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Comments & Feedback (9)

This is beautiful 😊

@Delilah that was the comment I was going to write! 😹😹

O well, it is lovely I really like it! β˜ΊπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

@crowncottage haha great mid think alike πŸ˜‰

This is so beautiful. You have a wonderful way with words, real talent. 🌟✨🌟✨

Beautiful setting! 😍

@Delilah @crowncottage @sleepydragon @pennygirl21 thank you for your inspiring comments

@eliza for you, of course xx

@jackalice <3 xx

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