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Daves Secret

#acrostic #idontbelieveindeadlines;)

(D)ave to most, seemed so normal
(A)lways calm never once got angry
(R)egal almost, and always so formal
(K)ind to his neighbours his friends and family

(S)o wrong were they, regarding this man
(E)nter the darkness he would every night
(C)arrying in him a maniacal plan
(R)elinquishing souls on their heavenly flight

(E)rupt he would with rage in these hours, a side of him he never shows
(T)hen back to a saint the next morning he'd turn, hoping his secret will never be known

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Comments & Feedback (18)

@Klaire I was at the R in secret when I realised the deadline had gone ๐Ÿ˜ฉ๐Ÿ˜

#youdontbelieveindeadlines huh? ๐Ÿ˜‚ I'd rate it 9.98... ๐Ÿ˜œ JK 10 all around ๐Ÿ˜Š

@Klaire quite a generous rating I guess ๐Ÿ˜œ....thanks for the RP ๐Ÿ˜˜

@sarahgamal many thanks for the kind RP ๐Ÿ˜˜

@BethyBoo a kind RP ๐Ÿ˜˜ many thanks

@patdolan83 could u plz rp 1 of my poems really appreciate it

@skyboy416 I'll take a look mate

@sara_lou thank you for the RP ๐Ÿ˜˜

@patdolan83 no probs Hun ๐Ÿ˜˜

I suspect there are many Daves in this world great write hun ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ˜˜

@insomnium thanks for the RP ๐Ÿ˜š

@sjw thanks for the RP ๐Ÿ˜˜....and for the lovely comment

Thanks for the lovely RP @sammielee46 ๐Ÿ˜˜

Great stuff mate ๐Ÿ‘ love the tag! ๐Ÿป๐Ÿป

@leelee101 cheers mate ๐Ÿป....the only true deadline is death itself.....that sounds like a tag line for a bad movie ๐Ÿ˜†

Oh and for the kind RP ๐Ÿป

@patdolan83 it's a corker! I think you may have given yourself a post in waiting right there mate! ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘

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